PLAYING GOD Chapter 6

dellamorte · Post by **dellamorte** » Fri Aug 29, 2008 5:10:01 pm

Link to Chapter 7
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SmokinAFuente · Post by **SmokinAFuente** » Sat Aug 30, 2008 9:34:42 am

Sweeet! I've been off the site for a while and just seen these yesterday. After reading the first five I was hooked! Keep up the killer work!

Elveen · Post by **Elveen** » Sat Aug 30, 2008 10:34:03 am

Very cool.

I am excited to see what role Darque will play in all this.

Daniel Jackson · Post by **Daniel Jackson** » Sat Aug 30, 2008 10:55:48 am

Great read. Just the right amount of humor to lighten up the drama.

robb77 · Post by **robb77** » Sat Aug 30, 2008 8:16:34 pm

nice

Rufusharley · Post by **Rufusharley** » Sat Aug 30, 2008 9:58:36 pm

It just gets better and better.

myron · Post by **myron** » Mon Sep 01, 2008 5:59:53 pm

Rufusharley wrote:It just gets better and better.

dave · Post by **dave** » Wed Sep 03, 2008 3:20:41 pm

so...jack huh? pretty cool!

iggy101us · Post by **iggy101us** » Wed Sep 03, 2008 4:10:41 pm

On page 30, can Hwen type in his transparent state? I thought he can’t be solid when he’s in that form.

On page 31, grammar mistake . . . I think it should be “he was burnt”, not “burned”.

Good job, BTW!

IanAlexavier · Post by **IanAlexavier** » Wed Sep 03, 2008 5:04:55 pm

Very very good!!! This stuff is great!!!

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Wed Sep 03, 2008 5:17:21 pm

iggy101us wrote:On page 30, can Hwen type in his transparent state? I thought he can’t be solid when he’s in that form.

On page 31, grammar mistake . . . I think it should be “he was burnt”, not “burned”.

Good job, BTW!

I should have put white spots to indicate Hwen manipulating the keyboard. Good Catch!

BloodOfHeroes · Post by **BloodOfHeroes** » Thu Sep 04, 2008 5:49:21 am

"When isn't it Darque?"

This just keeps getting better and better gents. You've really hit your stride, I think. Keep 'em coming.

yardstick · Post by **yardstick** » Thu Sep 04, 2008 8:46:08 am

Much easier to tell who is who!

good job guys!

dellamorte · Post by **dellamorte** » Sat Sep 13, 2008 6:17:46 pm

Just in case anyone is wondering, Chaper 7 has been delayed. We will get it up as soon as possilbe.

Elveen · Post by **Elveen** » Sat Sep 13, 2008 6:45:44 pm

dellamorte wrote:Just in case anyone is wondering, Chaper 7 has been delayed. We will get it up as soon as possilbe.

Bummer.

But thanks for the heads up.

etos45 · Post by **etos45** » Fri Sep 26, 2008 1:53:21 pm

dellamorte wrote:Just in case anyone is wondering, Chaper 7 has been delayed. We will get it up as soon as possilbe.

Whew.... looks like I was about to ask a really dumb question. Good thing I scrolled ALL the way down, huh?

dellamorte · Post by **dellamorte** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 12:05:28 pm

Chapter 7 should be up soon.

betterthanezra · Post by **betterthanezra** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 1:33:56 pm

Fraking Outstanding Work Gens Keeps improving and this episode One of the Best

-Brian

Daniel Jackson · Post by **Daniel Jackson** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 1:39:37 pm

dellamorte wrote:Chapter 7 should be up soon.

Yay!

Zaphod · Post by **Zaphod** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 2:10:26 pm

dellamorte wrote:Just in case anyone is wondering, Chaper 7 has been delayed. We will get it up as soon as possilbe.

sure, just keep feeding us that koolaid, Kevin

Fanboy375 · Post by **Fanboy375** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 2:43:39 pm

emailing it to Greg now!!!

BloodOfHeroes · Post by **BloodOfHeroes** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 3:32:36 pm

Fanboy375 wrote:emailing it to Greg now!!!

dave · Post by **dave** » Thu Aug 27, 2009 2:55:46 pm

Hey can someone more smarter than me put the links in for the next chapter. They are really helpful when you are going through re-reading.

All of them have links (so far) up to this one.

seymoregutz · Post by **seymoregutz** » Fri Oct 16, 2009 7:17:29 pm

WOW! you guys are some kind of talented! i don't even know all the players.......and i'm hooked! this has been posted a some time ago...i'm reading it and i HAVE to say something about it! 1-A+ !!!!!!!!