Superman Story

dave · Post by **dave** » Sat Aug 15, 2009 3:09 pm

Starting tomorrow (or today depending on when you see this I'm gonna post my Superman story here one chapter at a time.

It's called Superman : Choices

I hope you guys like it. I'm gonna post another chapter every Friday and that way I will have a weekend full of comments to see by the time I get back on Mondays.

dave · Post by **dave** » Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:43 am

Do to the overwhelming demand I'm going to have to limit this to the first 10,000 to respond...

You guys got that I was just joking about $, right?

dave · Post by **dave** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 5:35 pm

dave wrote:I waited until it was finished to let the cat out of the bag, but I wrote a 14 chapter (Issue) Superman story. My mom and I both think that it's really good, but I'd like to get some other opinions. It is ready to go right now, so if you'd like to check it out just pm me with your e-mail.

I only ask that you be kind, and give me some kinda feedback if it's not too much trouble.

For $19.95 I'll print you a copy and sign it. (j/k...Superman is a copyrighted character and all rights reserved. No animals were harmed in the typing of this post. Buy REAL DC comics so that they won't sue me!)

Peace!

Do I have to beg?

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 5:57 pm

dave wrote:
dave wrote:I waited until it was finished to let the cat out of the bag, but I wrote a 14 chapter (Issue) Superman story. My mom and I both think that it's really good, but I'd like to get some other opinions. It is ready to go right now, so if you'd like to check it out just pm me with your e-mail.

I only ask that you be kind, and give me some kinda feedback if it's not too much trouble.

For $19.95 I'll print you a copy and sign it. (j/k...Superman is a copyrighted character and all rights reserved. No animals were harmed in the typing of this post. Buy REAL DC comics so that they won't sue me!)

Peace!
Do I have to beg?

No begging needed and less confusing the hell outta everyone.
(ducks)

superman-prime · Post by **superman-prime** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:36 pm

ya the second part

dave · Post by **dave** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:57 pm

Is everyone confused?

Sorry.

Here is the deal. I wrote a Superman Story. It was called Superman Sacrifice, until I found out that in 2006 DC put out a GN with the same title. I have tentatively changed it to "Choices".

Here is a brief outline:

Lex Luthor has used his ties to the current President to push the Mission to Mars agenda through-no matter the cost. Investigators discover the presence of the largest kryptonian meteor ever discovered. Obviously, Luthor is up to his old tricks, or is he? It turns out he has far more humanitarian ideas in mind. Apparently, Lex is a bit of an environmentalist. Without giving away too much, the situation ends up being that Superman is given two choices: Die or leave.

Its a very good story, if I do say so myself, and I did research on it even. Green Lantern appears, as do Batman and Wonder Woman. Unfortunately Supergirl's cat Streaky or whatever, does not. You'll laugh, you'll cry, you'll wish you gave me your e-mail sooner!

So, NOW who wants a copy?

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 7:50 pm

dave wrote:Is everyone confused?

Sorry.

Here is the deal. I wrote a Superman Story. It was called Superman Sacrifice, until I found out that in 2006 DC put out a GN with the same title. I have tentatively changed it to "Choices".

Here is a brief outline:

Lex Luthor has used his ties to the current President to push the Mission to Mars agenda through-no matter the cost. Investigators discover the presence of the largest kryptonian meteor ever discovered. Obviously, Luthor is up to his old tricks, or is he? It turns out he has far more humanitarian ideas in mind. Apparently, Lex is a bit of an environmentalist. Without giving away too much, the situation ends up being that Superman is given two choices: Die or leave.

Its a very good story, if I do say so myself, and I did research on it even. Green Lantern appears, as do Batman and Wonder Woman. Unfortunately Supergirl's cat Streaky or whatever, does not. You'll laugh, you'll cry, you'll wish you gave me your e-mail sooner!

So, NOW who wants a copy?

Of what?

ian_house · Post by **ian_house** » Fri Aug 21, 2009 4:21 am

Just Thor

geocarr · Post by **geocarr** » Fri Aug 21, 2009 10:10 am

How many pages is it and is it something that you could post to the board in chapters or segments the way the online "Playing God" Valiant story is being posted?

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Fri Aug 21, 2009 10:41 am

geocarr wrote:How many pages is it and is it something that you could post to the board in chapters or segments the way the online "Playing God" Valiant story is being posted?

I personally think that would be a kick *SQUEE* idea. Always wanted to see a solid Fanzine section on the board.

ian_house · Post by **ian_house** » Fri Aug 21, 2009 12:30 pm

X-O HoboJoe wrote:
geocarr wrote:How many pages is it and is it something that you could post to the board in chapters or segments the way the online "Playing God" Valiant story is being posted?
I personally think that would be a kick *SQUEE* idea. Always wanted to see a solid Fanzine section on the board.

good thinking man

Got my vote.

slym2none · Post by **slym2none** » Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:53 pm

ian_house wrote:
X-O HoboJoe wrote:
geocarr wrote:How many pages is it and is it something that you could post to the board in chapters or segments the way the online "Playing God" Valiant story is being posted?
I personally think that would be a kick *SQUEE* idea. Always wanted to see a solid Fanzine section on the board.
good thinking man
Got my vote.

I second the idea, and table it for discussion.

-slym

dave · Post by **dave** » Tue Aug 25, 2009 7:16 pm

X-O HoboJoe wrote:
geocarr wrote:How many pages is it and is it something that you could post to the board in chapters or segments the way the online "Playing God" Valiant story is being posted?
I personally think that would be a kick *SQUEE* idea. Always wanted to see a solid Fanzine section on the board.

I totally could. The only problem is-you know how slow Hobo is with the artwork. I bet he's not even started on it yet!

(I sent it to him roughly 55 seconds ago.)

So, where would I put it?

I could always e-mail it to someone more smarter than me...

dave · Post by **dave** » Wed Aug 26, 2009 12:16 pm

X-O HoboJoe wrote:It reads well in script and I flat out enjoyed it. I got a good running imagry as I read it and I'll re-read it again with my arsehole glasses for edit tomorrow but as a fan-boy I give it a solid Thumbs Up as a damn good story that you've obviously put some time, effort and craft into.

IOW: Applause

Take that you doubters!

BloodOfHeroes · Post by **BloodOfHeroes** » Wed Aug 26, 2009 3:45 pm

Dude--was that a PM? If so, you should take it down. Bad form to make Primave Messages Public, in (almost) every online community.

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Wed Aug 26, 2009 3:52 pm

BloodOfHeroes wrote:Dude--was that a PM? If so, you should take it down. Bad form to make Primave Messages Public, in (almost) every online community.

Well, I do like it but am glad now I didn't attach those nekkid pictures like Dave asked.

BloodOfHeroes · Post by **BloodOfHeroes** » Wed Aug 26, 2009 3:58 pm

X-O HoboJoe (In a PM) wrote:Got any nekkid pictures of dave?

If not, wanna buy some?

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Wed Aug 26, 2009 4:14 pm

BloodOfHeroes wrote:
X-O HoboJoe (In a PM) wrote:Got any nekkid pictures of dave?

If not, wanna buy some?

I'd pass on the pictures and just read the script.

BloodOfHeroes · Post by **BloodOfHeroes** » Wed Aug 26, 2009 4:24 pm

Is that "pass on" the pictures or pass "on the pictures"?

Cuz those are 2 very different declarations, they are.

Orangeribbon · Post by **Orangeribbon** » Wed Aug 26, 2009 8:11 pm

slym2none wrote:
ian_house wrote:
X-O HoboJoe wrote:
geocarr wrote:How many pages is it and is it something that you could post to the board in chapters or segments the way the online "Playing God" Valiant story is being posted?
I personally think that would be a kick *SQUEE* idea. Always wanted to see a solid Fanzine section on the board.
good thinking man
Got my vote.
I second the idea, and table it for discussion.

-slym

Can they all break down to awkward love scenes, and include the author as a cool character that everyone of the fictional characters loves?

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:24 pm

Orangeribbon wrote:
slym2none wrote:
ian_house wrote:
X-O HoboJoe wrote:
geocarr wrote:How many pages is it and is it something that you could post to the board in chapters or segments the way the online "Playing God" Valiant story is being posted?
I personally think that would be a kick *SQUEE* idea. Always wanted to see a solid Fanzine section on the board.
good thinking man
Got my vote.
I second the idea, and table it for discussion.

-slym
Can they all break down to awkward love scenes, and include the author as a cool character that everyone of the fictional characters loves?

Works for every Peter David book, don't it?

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:25 pm

BloodOfHeroes wrote:Is that "pass on" the pictures or pass "on the pictures"?

Cuz those are 2 very different declarations, they are.

I wouldn't start soaping up the toothpicks or anything . . .

Chiclo · Post by **Chiclo** » Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:59 pm

Orangeribbon wrote:
slym2none wrote:
ian_house wrote:
X-O HoboJoe wrote:
geocarr wrote:How many pages is it and is it something that you could post to the board in chapters or segments the way the online "Playing God" Valiant story is being posted?
I personally think that would be a kick *SQUEE* idea. Always wanted to see a solid Fanzine section on the board.
good thinking man
Got my vote.
I second the idea, and table it for discussion.

-slym
Can they all break down to awkward love scenes, and include the author as a cool character that everyone of the fictional characters loves?

Someone obviously reads Cerebus.

BloodOfHeroes · Post by **BloodOfHeroes** » Thu Aug 27, 2009 5:16 am

X-O HoboJoe wrote:I wouldn't start soaping up the toothpicks or anything . . .

I believe you've confused me with another nanite-centric fanboy...

=/=

dave · Post by **dave** » Thu Aug 27, 2009 2:17 pm

And to think I got all excited seeing so many replies in this thread.

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