PLAYING GOD Chapter 13

dellamorte · Post by **dellamorte** » Thu Mar 19, 2009 10:19 am

Link to Chapter 14
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greg · Post by **greg** » Fri Mar 20, 2009 4:33 pm

Daniel Jackson · Post by **Daniel Jackson** » Fri Mar 20, 2009 4:43 pm

Great work guys, that last panel is favorite part.

dave · Post by **dave** » Fri Mar 20, 2009 5:08 pm

Duhn duhn duhhhhhhnnnnnn.....

wow, veen makes a request and y'all get right ot it!

VEI Reborn · Post by **VEI Reborn** » Fri Mar 20, 2009 5:15 pm

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Fri Mar 20, 2009 6:09 pm

dave wrote:Duhn duhn duhhhhhhnnnnnn.....

wow, veen makes a request and y'all get right ot it!

Dude, don't no-one *SQUEE* with the Veen.

xodacia81 · Post by **xodacia81** » Fri Mar 20, 2009 6:12 pm

Ok, well, now that this one is here, can we expect chapter NEXT before, oh, say, the mid term elections?

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Fri Mar 20, 2009 6:15 pm

xodacia81 wrote:Ok, well, now that this one is here, can we expect chapter NEXT before, oh, say, the mid term elections?

Art and lettering are down to the final edit stages so I'm the hold-up with a chap 15 teaser.

dellamorte · Post by **dellamorte** » Fri Mar 20, 2009 6:22 pm

xodacia81 wrote:Ok, well, now that this one is here, can we expect chapter NEXT before, oh, say, the mid term elections?

Like Stu said, chapter 14 is nearly done but I think it's best if we hold it back until some progress gets done on chapter 15. I'd like to get the next one up in two weeks (kinda how this thing was going before) but we'll have to wait and see.

xodacia81 · Post by **xodacia81** » Fri Mar 20, 2009 6:23 pm

X-O HoboJoe wrote:
xodacia81 wrote:Ok, well, now that this one is here, can we expect chapter NEXT before, oh, say, the mid term elections?

Art and lettering are down to the final edit stages so I'm the hold-up with a chap 15 teaser.

At least that's SOME news.

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Fri Mar 20, 2009 6:29 pm

xodacia81 wrote:
X-O HoboJoe wrote:
xodacia81 wrote:Ok, well, now that this one is here, can we expect chapter NEXT before, oh, say, the mid term elections?

Art and lettering are down to the final edit stages so I'm the hold-up with a chap 15 teaser.
At least that's SOME news.

Dude, so wrong . . .

iggy101us · Post by **iggy101us** » Fri Mar 20, 2009 6:31 pm

dave · Post by **dave** » Fri Mar 20, 2009 6:45 pm

my only critique on this one would be that if there were some dots leading into the story like this

...as soon as you can, and everyone you can.

it would make it a little less confusing, i had to re-read it a couple times at first.

dellamorte · Post by **dellamorte** » Fri Mar 20, 2009 7:12 pm

dave wrote:my only critique on this one would be that if there were some dots leading into the story like this

...as soon as you can, and everyone you can.

it would make it a little less confusing, i had to re-read it a couple times at first.

That was brought up by one of our geomancers. I guess we should have paid attention.

myron · Post by **myron** » Fri Mar 20, 2009 7:18 pm

very impressive gentlemen...very impressive.

xodacia81 · Post by **xodacia81** » Sat Mar 21, 2009 10:40 am

myron wrote:very impressive gentlemen...very impressive.

Indeed. All those shattered windows and bricks. Yowza!

robb77 · Post by **robb77** » Sat Mar 21, 2009 4:59 pm

MoonChild · Post by **MoonChild** » Mon Mar 23, 2009 2:25 am

A Little Late to the Party, but well worth it

Thanks.

MoonChild · Post by **MoonChild** » Mon Mar 23, 2009 2:26 am

Double post

Zaphod · Post by **Zaphod** » Mon Mar 23, 2009 7:09 am

Harada got punked. Good job, peeps.

Elveen · Post by **Elveen** » Mon Mar 23, 2009 5:43 pm

Super Great.

The detail on Gilly's gril is superb.

I like the line, "I've been through a hundred wars and I've only seen..."

I like the first shot of Toyo's double eye smack down..... the flying phone in the top corner is a nice attention to detail.

And obv. the last shot is perfect.

SO how many chapters do you imagine this will be?

dellamorte · Post by **dellamorte** » Mon Mar 23, 2009 5:56 pm

Elveen wrote:SO how many chapters do you imagine this will be?

17

MoonChild · Post by **MoonChild** » Mon Mar 23, 2009 6:43 pm

dellamorte wrote:
Elveen wrote:SO how many chapters do you imagine this will be?
17

Oh so it's close to wrapping up! I'm half way excited about that and half way bummed out by it!

Excited to see it all in color and hopefully get a hardcopy and bummed out because, well it's coming to an end, of course.

Great Job Thus Far

dave · Post by **dave** » Thu Mar 26, 2009 7:13 pm

dellamorte wrote:
Elveen wrote:SO how many chapters do you imagine this will be?
17

That's not what i heard...of course, i'm not writing it...

dellamorte · Post by **dellamorte** » Thu Mar 26, 2009 7:26 pm

dave wrote:
dellamorte wrote:
Elveen wrote:SO how many chapters do you imagine this will be?
17
That's not what i heard...of course, i'm not writing it...

Really? What did you hear?