PLAYING GOD Chapter 13

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PLAYING GOD Chapter 13

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Great work guys, that last panel is favorite part.

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Duhn duhn duhhhhhhnnnnnn.....

wow, veen makes a request and y'all get right ot it! :wink:

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dave wrote:Duhn duhn duhhhhhhnnnnnn.....

wow, veen makes a request and y'all get right ot it! :wink:
Dude, don't no-one *SQUEE* with the Veen. :thumb:
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Ok, well, now that this one is here, can we expect chapter NEXT before, oh, say, the mid term elections? :wink: :twisted:

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xodacia81 wrote:Ok, well, now that this one is here, can we expect chapter NEXT before, oh, say, the mid term elections? :wink: :twisted:
:lol:

Art and lettering are down to the final edit stages so I'm the hold-up with a chap 15 teaser. :tomato:
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xodacia81 wrote:Ok, well, now that this one is here, can we expect chapter NEXT before, oh, say, the mid term elections? :wink: :twisted:
Like Stu said, chapter 14 is nearly done but I think it's best if we hold it back until some progress gets done on chapter 15. I'd like to get the next one up in two weeks (kinda how this thing was going before) but we'll have to wait and see.

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X-O HoboJoe wrote:
xodacia81 wrote:Ok, well, now that this one is here, can we expect chapter NEXT before, oh, say, the mid term elections? :wink: :twisted:
:lol:

Art and lettering are down to the final edit stages so I'm the hold-up with a chap 15 teaser. :tomato:
At least that's SOME news.

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xodacia81 wrote:
X-O HoboJoe wrote:
xodacia81 wrote:Ok, well, now that this one is here, can we expect chapter NEXT before, oh, say, the mid term elections? :wink: :twisted:
:lol:

Art and lettering are down to the final edit stages so I'm the hold-up with a chap 15 teaser. :tomato:
At least that's SOME news.
Dude, so wrong . . . :lol:
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my only critique on this one would be that if there were some dots leading into the story like this

...as soon as you can, and everyone you can.

it would make it a little less confusing, i had to re-read it a couple times at first.

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dave wrote:my only critique on this one would be that if there were some dots leading into the story like this

...as soon as you can, and everyone you can.

it would make it a little less confusing, i had to re-read it a couple times at first.
:oops: That was brought up by one of our geomancers. I guess we should have paid attention.

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very impressive gentlemen...very impressive.
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myron wrote:very impressive gentlemen...very impressive.
Indeed. All those shattered windows and bricks. Yowza!

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Super Great.

The detail on Gilly's gril is superb.

I like the line, "I've been through a hundred wars and I've only seen..." :thumb:


I like the first shot of Toyo's double eye smack down..... the flying phone in the top corner is a nice attention to detail.

And obv. the last shot is perfect.



SO how many chapters do you imagine this will be?

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Elveen wrote:SO how many chapters do you imagine this will be?
17

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dellamorte wrote:
Elveen wrote:SO how many chapters do you imagine this will be?
17
Oh so it's close to wrapping up! I'm half way excited about that and half way bummed out by it!

Excited to see it all in color and hopefully get a hardcopy and bummed out because, well it's coming to an end, of course.

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dellamorte wrote:
Elveen wrote:SO how many chapters do you imagine this will be?
17
That's not what i heard...of course, i'm not writing it... :P :lol: 8-)

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dave wrote:
dellamorte wrote:
Elveen wrote:SO how many chapters do you imagine this will be?
17
That's not what i heard...of course, i'm not writing it... :P :lol: 8-)
Really? What did you hear?


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