PLAYING GOD Chapter 4

dellamorte · Post by **dellamorte** » Fri Jul 18, 2008 9:06 pm

Chapter 5 link

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iggy101us · Post by **iggy101us** » Sat Jul 19, 2008 1:22 am

etos45 · Post by **etos45** » Sat Jul 19, 2008 7:30 am

I was hoping this was going to be there!

BTW - I think there is a typo at the bottom of 19. "make peace what whatever you worship"... I'm guessing it is "with whatever"? No biggie, I just wanted to be the first anal person to point it out.

Daniel Jackson · Post by **Daniel Jackson** » Sat Jul 19, 2008 11:39 am

Fantastic. I'm loving this.

iggy101us · Post by **iggy101us** » Sat Jul 19, 2008 12:31 pm

etos45 wrote:I was hoping this was going to be there!

BTW - I think there is a typo at the bottom of 19. "make peace what whatever you worship"... I'm guessing it is "with whatever"? No biggie, I just wanted to be the first anal person to point it out.

Also page 19, 1st panel it should be "fantastic" instead of "fantstic".

Elveen · Post by **Elveen** » Sat Jul 19, 2008 12:43 pm

Great. Do we know how many chapters this is going to be?

MoonChild · Post by **MoonChild** » Sat Jul 19, 2008 2:05 pm

great installment

Daniel Jackson · Post by **Daniel Jackson** » Sat Jul 19, 2008 4:32 pm

Elveen wrote:Great. Do we know how many chapters this is going to be?

Here is what Dell said earlier.

dellamorte wrote:
Fanboy375 wrote:How many chapters can we look forward to? This is GREAT stuff!!!
If I had to guess somwhere between 15 and 20 chapters.

greg · Post by **greg** » Sat Jul 19, 2008 4:47 pm

Typos on page 4 (numbered page 19) have been corrected.

QWfanSD · Post by **QWfanSD** » Sat Jul 19, 2008 8:23 pm

I like the art it is getting better.

Brother J · Post by **Brother J** » Sat Jul 19, 2008 8:25 pm

QWfanSD wrote:I like the art it is getting better.

You put the guy who did the art on ignore!

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Sat Jul 19, 2008 8:25 pm

Well, I'd like to say "Thank you," but you have me on "Ignore."

Oh well: good thing you didn't take the time to read the credits or I doubt you'd like the art at all.

robb77 · Post by **robb77** » Mon Jul 21, 2008 5:42 pm

class

BloodOfHeroes · Post by **BloodOfHeroes** » Mon Jul 21, 2008 6:49 pm

I fell behind, but finally caught up today.

Gents--you've totally won me over.

NIIICELY done!

Keep 'em coming, please!

IanAlexavier · Post by **IanAlexavier** » Mon Jul 21, 2008 6:56 pm

Wow!! You guys are doing great!!! Im loving everything about it!

There might be a comma missing inbetween "..guess what light bulb?" or maybe not. When I read it I have to re read it several times to understand he was making fun of the blad guy (HEY! LOL) and/or maybe italize the '...light bulb!?!'

Bravo!!

Zaphod · Post by **Zaphod** » Mon Jul 21, 2008 7:00 pm

X-O HoboJoe wrote:Well, I'd like to say "Thank you," but you have me on "Ignore."

Oh well: good thing you didn't take the time to read the credits or I doubt you'd like the art at all.

Quoted for QWfanSD to bypass the ignore feature.

X-O HoboJoe · Post by **X-O HoboJoe** » Mon Jul 21, 2008 10:55 pm

MProyas wrote:
X-O HoboJoe wrote:Well, I'd like to say "Thank you," but you have me on "Ignore."

Oh well: good thing you didn't take the time to read the credits or I doubt you'd like the art at all.
Quoted for QWfanSD to bypass the ignore feature.

You are sooooo getting a premium item for that trick.

Phantom · Post by **Phantom** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 4:07 pm

loving it

xodacia81 · Post by **xodacia81** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 4:09 pm

Interesting devlopments. I wonder if the one is actually as it appears.

myron · Post by **myron** » Sun Jul 27, 2008 1:45 pm

Daniel Jackson wrote:Fantastic. I'm loving this.

Zaphod · Post by **Zaphod** » Tue Jul 29, 2008 2:01 pm

X-O HoboJoe wrote:
MProyas wrote:
X-O HoboJoe wrote:Well, I'd like to say "Thank you," but you have me on "Ignore."

Oh well: good thing you didn't take the time to read the credits or I doubt you'd like the art at all.
Quoted for QWfanSD to bypass the ignore feature.

You are sooooo getting a premium item for that trick.

KICKASS!!

I demand platinum variant. So says Zod.

Dr. Solar · Post by **Dr. Solar** » Thu Jul 31, 2008 11:09 pm

Nice. This gets curiouser and curiouser.

Burrito Boy · Post by **Burrito Boy** » Wed Jan 14, 2009 10:30 pm

It's great to see Gunny going into action again.

And the establishing shot of the army base was amazing.

Daniel Jackson · Post by **Daniel Jackson** » Wed Jan 14, 2009 10:59 pm

Welcome to the board.

Burrito Boy · Post by **Burrito Boy** » Thu Feb 05, 2009 9:20 pm

Daniel Jackson wrote:Welcome to the board.

Thanks.

Sorry I didn't respond earlier but I don't get out much.