PLAYING GOD Chapter 6

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PLAYING GOD Chapter 6

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Continued in two weeks.

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Post by SmokinAFuente »

Sweeet! I've been off the site for a while and just seen these yesterday. After reading the first five I was hooked! Keep up the killer work!

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Very cool.

I am excited to see what role Darque will play in all this.

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Great read. Just the right amount of humor to lighten up the drama.

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nice :thumb:

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It just gets better and better. :clap:

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Rufusharley wrote:It just gets better and better. :clap:
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so...jack huh? pretty cool!

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Post by iggy101us »

On page 30, can Hwen type in his transparent state? I thought he can’t be solid when he’s in that form.

On page 31, grammar mistake . . . I think it should be “he was burnt”, not “burned”.

Good job, BTW! :clap:

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Very very good!!! This stuff is great!!! :thumb: :thumb: :clap: :clap: :thumb: :thumb:

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Post by X-O HoboJoe »

iggy101us wrote:On page 30, can Hwen type in his transparent state? I thought he can’t be solid when he’s in that form.

On page 31, grammar mistake . . . I think it should be “he was burnt”, not “burned”.

Good job, BTW! :clap:
I should have put white spots to indicate Hwen manipulating the keyboard. Good Catch! :clap:

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"When isn't it Darque?"

:lol:

This just keeps getting better and better gents. You've really hit your stride, I think. Keep 'em coming.

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Much easier to tell who is who!

good job guys!

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Just in case anyone is wondering, Chaper 7 has been delayed. We will get it up as soon as possilbe.

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dellamorte wrote:Just in case anyone is wondering, Chaper 7 has been delayed. We will get it up as soon as possilbe.
Bummer.

But thanks for the heads up.

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dellamorte wrote:Just in case anyone is wondering, Chaper 7 has been delayed. We will get it up as soon as possilbe.
Whew.... looks like I was about to ask a really dumb question. Good thing I scrolled ALL the way down, huh? :P

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Chapter 7 should be up soon.

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Fraking Outstanding Work Gens Keeps improving and this episode One of the Best :thumb:


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dellamorte wrote:Chapter 7 should be up soon.
Yay!

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dellamorte wrote:Just in case anyone is wondering, Chaper 7 has been delayed. We will get it up as soon as possilbe.
sure, just keep feeding us that koolaid, Kevin
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emailing it to Greg now!!!

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Fanboy375 wrote:emailing it to Greg now!!!
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Post by dave »

Hey can someone more smarter than me put the links in for the next chapter. They are really helpful when you are going through re-reading.

All of them have links (so far) up to this one.

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Post by seymoregutz »

WOW! you guys are some kind of talented! i don't even know all the players.......and i'm hooked! this has been posted a some time ago...i'm reading it and i HAVE to say something about it! 1-A+ !!!!!!!!


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