Playing God - a Valiant story written, drawn, edited, and published online for ValiantFans.com in 2008-2009.
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well...they are nitpicky anal things that aren't entirely constructive...not that I could think they would be anyways so really...just griping from someone who isn't stepping up to the plate.X-O HoboJoe wrote:Seriously, I'd like to hear why so improvements can be made and a good critique is far less easy to come by than one would suspect.Zaphod wrote:I kinda feel *SQUEE* saying anything negative but will just leave it at, not the strongest of the chapters IMO. In dialogue or art.
I still strongly support the job you guys are doing, but there were some points that I didn't much like (is all, heh)
If you don't want to publically, could you PM?
If I had constructive criticism or suggestions it might be helpful but as I think on it...I don't know that I do, when it comes to the art. I couldn't manage stick figures let alone utilize forced perspective or what-have-you.
Storywise, I think it might be helpful to use peoples names more often.
Any more plot gripes, I really need to wait until there is a finished product before I can rip anyone a new MOTAhole.
heh, anyone think the term might catch on. And I mean it as a tribute, truly.
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