PLAYING GOD Chapter 10

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PLAYING GOD Chapter 10

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Please note the PG Promotion Contest winners First Among Equals and Siren3-4 are now officially denziens of the Lost Land as seen in page 4 panel 1. :clap:

Good job guys! :thumb:
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Another excellent installment.

It's great to see A&A and Geoff again. It will be interesting to see what will happen when we have two Geomancers.

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Another awesome installment... foaming at the mouth, here! :thumb:

I can't wait to see what the Book 2 cover looks like!

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Good stuff :thumb: . I look forward to book 2.

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Daniel Jackson wrote:Another excellent installment.

It's great to see A&A and Geoff again. It will be interesting to see what will happen when we have two Geomancers.
this is pure speculation-but i think clay is gonna get whacked.

as far as i know "there can be only one" and we know that geoff is still around in rai #0, so my guess is he's a goner!

this installment really seemed to move the story along better than the last few. we're starting to get a glimpse of how things might shake out, and we're getting some answers. great work guys.

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dave wrote:
Daniel Jackson wrote:Another excellent installment.

It's great to see A&A and Geoff again. It will be interesting to see what will happen when we have two Geomancers.
this is pure speculation-but i think clay is gonna get whacked.

as far as i know "there can be only one" and we know that geoff is still around in rai #0, so my guess is he's a goner!

this installment really seemed to move the story along better than the last few. we're starting to get a glimpse of how things might shake out, and we're getting some answers. great work guys.
So, not gonna speculate on the Harby angle? :hm:
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X-O HoboJoe wrote:Please note the PG Promotion Contest winners First Among Equals and Siren3-4 are now officially denziens of the Lost Land as seen in page 4 panel 1. :clap:

Good job guys! :thumb:

8-)

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siren3-4 wrote:
X-O HoboJoe wrote:Please note the PG Promotion Contest winners First Among Equals and Siren3-4 are now officially denziens of the Lost Land as seen in page 4 panel 1. :clap:

Good job guys! :thumb:

8-)
You've got the bow, so how do you feel about being the new Turok?

I guess that makes FAE the new Andar?
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page 47 and top panel of page 50 ~ are fantastic.
Must of taken ages to draw and ink those.

Blown away.

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Phantom wrote:page 47 and top panel of page 50 ~ are fantastic.
Must of taken ages to draw and ink those.

Blown away.
Just think how long it will take to...and how much ink it will take to....

Ah darn, not time yet!!!

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Phantom wrote:page 47 and top panel of page 50 ~ are fantastic.
Must of taken ages to draw and ink those.

Blown away.
Thank you, sir.

IMO the coolest thing about the top panel on pg 50 (my God, are we actually past 50 pgs? :o ) is not only the fact that there are two flesh and blood board members there, but the great lettering job Fanboy did after I drew as bunch of crazy stuff everywhere. :oops:

You guys are gonna trip when you see what Fanboy's set up for you starting next installment. :clap:
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X-O HoboJoe wrote:
Phantom wrote:page 47 and top panel of page 50 ~ are fantastic.
Must of taken ages to draw and ink those.

Blown away.
Thank you, sir.

IMO the coolest thing about the top panel on pg 50 (my God, are we actually past 50 pgs? :o ) is not only the fact that there are two flesh and blood board members there, but the great lettering job Fanboy did after I drew as bunch of crazy stuff everywhere. :oops:

You guys are gonna trip when you see what Fanboy's set up for you starting next installment. :clap:
Can't wait.

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X-O HoboJoe wrote:
siren3-4 wrote:
X-O HoboJoe wrote:Please note the PG Promotion Contest winners First Among Equals and Siren3-4 are now officially denziens of the Lost Land as seen in page 4 panel 1. :clap:

Good job guys! :thumb:

8-)
You've got the bow, so how do you feel about being the new Turok?

I guess that makes FAE the new Andar?
Way cool . . lol

I always thought Turok needed a scruffy beard anyway . . . :)

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I kinda feel *SQUEE* saying anything negative but will just leave it at, not the strongest of the chapters IMO. In dialogue or art.

I still strongly support the job you guys are doing, but there were some points that I didn't much like (is all, heh)
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Zaphod wrote:I kinda feel *SQUEE* saying anything negative but will just leave it at, not the strongest of the chapters IMO. In dialogue or art.

I still strongly support the job you guys are doing, but there were some points that I didn't much like (is all, heh)
Seriously, I'd like to hear why so improvements can be made and a good critique is far less easy to come by than one would suspect.

If you don't want to publically, could you PM? :hope:
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well, number one I should havae been drawn in there instead of anyone else, for starters :P

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X-O HoboJoe wrote:
dave wrote:
Daniel Jackson wrote:Another excellent installment.

It's great to see A&A and Geoff again. It will be interesting to see what will happen when we have two Geomancers.
this is pure speculation-but i think clay is gonna get whacked.

as far as i know "there can be only one" and we know that geoff is still around in rai #0, so my guess is he's a goner!

this installment really seemed to move the story along better than the last few. we're starting to get a glimpse of how things might shake out, and we're getting some answers. great work guys.
So, not gonna speculate on the Harby angle? :hm:
as far as any such speculation, i think this installment cemented my original thought-but i don't know how that might relate to the geomancer situation. :|

and yer still a big jerk for never really answering the question! you just say, you noticed something no one else did (even though it's 100% WRONG!) or oh really? didn't i? :mad: :P :wink: :lol: :|

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dave wrote:
X-O HoboJoe wrote:
dave wrote:
Daniel Jackson wrote:Another excellent installment.

It's great to see A&A and Geoff again. It will be interesting to see what will happen when we have two Geomancers.
this is pure speculation-but i think clay is gonna get whacked.

as far as i know "there can be only one" and we know that geoff is still around in rai #0, so my guess is he's a goner!

this installment really seemed to move the story along better than the last few. we're starting to get a glimpse of how things might shake out, and we're getting some answers. great work guys.
So, not gonna speculate on the Harby angle? :hm:
as far as any such speculation, i think this installment cemented my original thought-but i don't know how that might relate to the geomancer situation. :|

and yer still a big jerk for never really answering the question! you just say, you noticed something no one else did (even though it's 100% WRONG!) or oh really? didn't i? :mad: :P :wink: :lol: :|
Right or wrong, you caught some of the easter egg stuff that no one else has brought up. :thumb:
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maybe i'll start a poll to see if anyone wants me to tell.

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Another excellent installment. :thumb:

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p.s. jack kirby called and he wants his layouts back! 8-)


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