PLAYING GOD Chapter 2

Playing God - a Valiant story written, drawn, edited, and published online for ValiantFans.com in 2008-2009.

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UnknownTales
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Post by UnknownTales »

I suggest a change in dialog:

bottom left, page 8

Change...


I DONT CLAIM ANYTHING

to

I DONT ACCLAIM ANYTHNG

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Post by iggy101us »

There's a typo on page 10, panel 1. "It's" should be "Its".

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Post by X-O HoboJoe »

UnknownTales wrote:I suggest a change in dialog:

bottom left, page 8

Change...


I DONT CLAIM ANYTHING

to

I DONT ACCLAIM ANYTHNG


:lol: :clap:
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Post by dave »

for real though the nurse should say wHispered not wisper...i know it's just a typo, just thought i'd mention it-BEFORE this goes to print!!!


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